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This is pretty awsome, but i found it pretty repetitive and redundant.
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This is pretty awsome, but i found it pretty repetitive and redundant.
haha, yeah, your right, but im glad you still thought it was cool :)
A skeleton of a good song
No offence but it sounds kind of like a three year old banging on a piano. U should add some more rythm to it and some more overall variety to the music. Make it more interesting. Your chord progressions arn't that bad, u just need something to tie them together.
I want to, I'm just not exactly sure where to go... because I'm lazy...
Pretty Good
I didn't like this quite as well as some of your other things that I have listened to. I do like the oboe though :), you really like oboes don't you :). Please understand that this is constructive criticism: I found this song to be sort of "unintersesting" after a while. I think this is a good general rough draft for a potentially amazing peice. I am seeing a build that leads up to a little climax where maybe the high voices drop out and the low voices play a rythmic little something with maybe a taiko ensemble. But that's just me. Pretty good work overall.
Thnx! I enjoy constructive criticism. I actually don't like it when someone does the whole 'Mom' approach and is afraid to be candid with their reviews; if things were like that, then how would we ever learn?
Yes, I love oboes, idk why everyone hates them (when I tell my friends who are clarinetists to pick up oboe, they reply with an "eeeewww.") If used properly, oboes are a very interesting instrument. RPGs use them a lot, so that's what gave me an influence.
Yes, this song was among my first songs using my DAW, and my first song focusing on harmony. So it's kind of a "practice." I'm not going to do anymore to this song, but I used what I learned from composing this song to compose other songs, like 'Almany.'
Thanks for the review!
Awsome
I really like this. I personally think that some of the "weird" notes add a certain element of intrest and are "artistic". I am one who apreciates nonconventional harmonies and chords. I really like the main meledy to this, keep it up. This would be very good for a game. It is in that style where you take an idea (your awsome meledy) and play around with it, which is the general style of a lot of arcade style games. good work :). 5/5 10/10
Thanx! Yes, I remember when I made this song (i was 14, it was the middle of a Wisconsin winter (snow day =) !) , and I was sicker than a rabid dog =P). It was a pretty great track back then. I really want to do a remix, and I eventually will, but time is always against me. Plus I have sooo many other projects I need to work on and finish.
Thanx for the review!
Awsome
are those taikos at thhe begining?
I tapped on my violin and lowered the pitch, it made a nice percussive sound, so it's a tapped violin recording xD
Thanks for the review :3
-Aeris
Very Bright
This inspires such bright emotions, you are a very skilled composer.
Thanks. I just think up a tune and roll with it. Glad you like it!
Thank you for reviewing!
well done but incomlete without an accompaniment
I agree that a string instrument (probably a cello) would add a lot to this peice
I'm currently working on completing the song, by improving the quality and adding another instrument (Probably a cello as you suggested). Thanks for the review!
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